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Tossing and turning.
The aches and the burning.
Crying inside.
Sheets and pillows are my only comfort.
Longing and desire.
To have me
And acquire.

Dipping into dreams.
Missing you by my side.

Massive oceans.
Emotion of tide.
Erupting.
flooding the earth
helpless
wrapping my legs around you.
But its not you.
Its sheets.

Empty pillows.
dusty windows.
locked doors.
tilted picture frames.
dirty clothes.
Morning sun.

Gone.

Tell me what you dream of.
What you're thinking.
I need your presence.
I need your scent.
I need your soul.
I need your love.
to thrive, to be alive.

Beautiful dreams.
Come what may.
Your words of love.
Never leave me, they stay.
Missing your dreams,
day by day.
©2009 ~darknessupon
:icondarknessupon:

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:iconjupit3r:
Nicely written. How've you been?

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Think about thinking...
:iconnitespirit:
you should get your poems published tara :)
:icondarknessupon:
I have gave it some thought.....In the past

Your very sweet, Nitespirit.

thank you

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Please take this
And run far away
Far away from me.
I am Tainted
The two of us
Were never meant to be
All these Pieces
And promises and left behinds
If only I could see
In my
Nothing
You meant everything
Everything to me


NIN
:icondarknessupon:
Thanks Jup...

To be honest? I feel like shit..
How have you been?

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Please take this
And run far away
Far away from me.
I am Tainted
The two of us
Were never meant to be
All these Pieces
And promises and left behinds
If only I could see
In my
Nothing
You meant everything
Everything to me


NIN
:iconjupit3r:
Oh no! Hope you feel better soon!

Nothing, serious, I hope.

Yes, I'm good thanks.

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Think about thinking...
:icondarknessupon:
thanks alot

--
Please take this
And run far away
Far away from me.
I am Tainted
The two of us
Were never meant to be
All these Pieces
And promises and left behinds
If only I could see
In my
Nothing
You meant everything
Everything to me


NIN
:iconjupit3r:
welcome :)

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Think about thinking...
:iconhezekiah:
You do weave a beautiful depression my dear... Wonderful poem - in flows like blood. I especially like the phrase "empty pillows"; I may have to plagiarize that at some point... Most evocative it is indeed.

Anyway, excellent work, as usual.

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!Bad Bunnies! :ninjastar::jackdirt: !Bad Bunnies!
:icondarknessupon:
Thanks Heze

--
Please take this
And run far away
Far away from me.
I am Tainted
The two of us
Were never meant to be
All these Pieces
And promises and left behinds
If only I could see
In my
Nothing
You meant everything
Everything to me


NIN

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